User:RooftopWriter/Aimee Cox/RAlexis13 Peer Review

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Dr. Aimee Cox
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Evaluate the drafted changes
I loved that the information provided about Cox was chronologically ordered and that it already seems like an expansiv plethora of information about her. It is very apparent that the group put the necessary effort into the research.

One improvement might be to continue focusing on the structure of the information, I felt as though the information about her career could be improved on by having the content flow better as it currently seems choppy (?) and the transition is abrupt.