User:Roscoetherooster/Nazi architecture/Lilibet128 Peer Review

The content you've added is neutral and relevant to the topic. I am impressed by you're amount and quality of sources as well. However, I feel as though the lead could introduce the topic more clearly at the beginning. It is perhaps even overly detailed in unrelated specifics.

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