User:Rose2720/Dr. Jessica Hua/Megvdb4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rose2720


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rose2720/Dr._Jessica_Hua?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has a great introductory sentence to the topic. The lead contains insight to the content of the rest of the article. The lead is concise. I think your lead section is perfect.

I love the info box for her.

Maybe add a caption to the picture saying where is was taken, like for example "Jessica Hua doing research in Texas in 2012"

For the Graduate education maybe explain some her research she did for it? I would suggest reading her thesis and summarizing what she worked on. Was she in any societies? Did she present at conferences?

I think you could expand on the Post-Doc section too, you said she studied amphibian disease ecology, maybe explain what her goal was or her findings.

The content is excellent and I think the outreach section is great. Maybe see if you can find out where the past outreach took place? Or see if there is any pictures from any of them, could be good photo ops.

I would be careful with a lot of your sources seeming to be from the person the article is on.