User:Rose2720/Dr. Jessica Hua/Rojinkharrazi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rose2720


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rose2720/Dr. Jessica Hua
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Intro[edit]
"The Hua Lab" can be hyperlinked to an external link (her website)

Content[edit]
In your first mention, it would be helpful to specify if it's a Bachelor of Arts or Bachelor of Science.

One suggestion I have to add to your article is regarding the "Research" section. Maybe review your uncommon leader's published articles and include what significant findings, etc. in that section

In Career and Research section, I am not sure if you need quotation marks around the questions you ask.

Dont forget to add categories

Tone and Balance[edit]
No biased tone!

Organization[edit]
You have a pretty long article, you might have space for another picture if you find one... I always enjoy looking at pictures of the leaders at their place of work... if her lab website has images like that I would suggest you include it in.