User:Roselyn.cortez/Chicana literature/Erindeguchi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Roselyn.cortez


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Roselyn.cortez/Chicana_literature?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chicano literature

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * good info
 * for the first statement in the article segment make sure the word "girl" is plural
 * and the quote you mentioned >> change "women'a rights " to women's rights
 * "Chicana writing came from the feminism for the portrayal of the gender issues." try rewriting this statement to make more sense, I understand what you're trying to say but it does not come off right. Maybe "Chicana writing came from the feminists' view of the portrayal of gender issues"