User:Rosemary Guo/Lake Tai/Wiki limno Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rosemary Guo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rosemary Guo/Lake Tai


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lake Tai

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Hongru, this is Lizzy. Good start on your page. I thought it was well organized and you provide a lot of specific limnological information based on the lake that isn't on the current page. One thing to change before the final draft, I noticed you put your citations in front of the paragraph, but traditionally in Wikipedia they go at the end of the sentence or paragraph that references the source. Don't forget to take advantage of linking to other articles (Ctr+K or the cite button at the top). You could go into more detail about the work Wang et al has done, I thought this was an interesting paragraph that you could develop more.

Last thing, in your second paragraph you talk about different periods of research in the lake and write this "As a result, they found both climate and nutrients elements played a very important role in algae bloom and the algae composition in different periods (five)" Are there five periods? Or is this a citation? This paragraph needs some clarification. Thanks for your hard work!