User:Rosencrantz and Guildenstern/Archon (Gnosticism)/Public Scrutony Peer Review

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General info

 * Rosencrantz and Guildenstern
 * Archon

Lead

 * Good overview of which groups believe in archons
 * It is mentioned that Ophites and adherents of Manichaeism believe in archons but then these groups are not mentioned again; a later addition of these groups and their views about archons would be good

Content

 * Easy to follow in that the article divides up groups (Sethians, Greek theology, etc...) and explains their views of archons
 * Good listing of textual appearances of the archons
 * Helps the reader understand the nuances of archon belief among various groups

Tone and Balance

 * Overall seems quite balanced

Sources and References

 * Good number of sources
 * Sources are quite recent (1987 is the earliest reference cited)

Organization

 * Some grammatical errors, spaces needed between words
 * Concise entries for each topic, it doesn't feel as if any section unduly drags on