User:Roserock99/Three Blind Mice (1938 film)/Shayneras97 Peer Review

General info

 * When you read the plot description, can you follow the story of the movie? Note any parts that were confusing to you.

The plot is very well put together.


 * Are there internal wiki links to all relevant actors, production personnel, historical entities or events?

Yes


 * Are there citations for any facts that do NOT come from watching the movie itself?

No, other than the wiki links to the actors and actresses, the only link is to the film itself.


 * Do you see any grammatical issues that the writer should correct?

grammatically sound


 * Any other comments on the entry?

There is some work to be done, such as adding reviews to a reception section, other than that from what I can see it is a pretty solid piece of work.

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