User:Roshawndrathomas/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Dress history

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article to evaluate because I was curious on what specifics were being discussed in the article about the history of dresses. I hoped to gain more knowledge on how the yearly differences influenced the progression and design change in dresses.

Evaluate the article
My overall impression on the article was that it was good, but lacked details and pictures. I would have liked to see more pictures on different designs and materials of dresses. It also lacked details on the progression of dresses and also time periods difference in dress choices. There were several missed spelled words like analyzing, specialized, centered, etc. The article did a good job using other resources to support the topic. The article also did a good job of listing examples of dresses, but I would have like more of an explanation on some dresses on how it contributed to the progression of dress making or fashion industry.

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