User:Rosie1470/Ore shoots/Laukes Peer Review

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Rosie1470
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Rosie1470/sandbox:User:Rosie1470/Ore shoots/Bibliography:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rosie1470/Ore_shoots?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template :The original article is called Ore Shoot, and I found the potential additions in Rosie1470's sandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Ore shoot

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The introductory sentence concisely describes ore shoots, but there could be more clarity, like what ore or veins are. The lead does not touch on all the main sections of the article, it focuses primarily on defining ore shoots and their significance. I would suggest adding a few sentences on the main sections of the article.

Content

This article describes ore vein structure, the sizes of ore shoots, and notes that they can consist of multiple shoots with veins extending horizontally and vertically. It also highlights the complex geological processes involved in the formation of ore shoots and provides examples from specific regions, emphasizing their significance in mineral deposits. This content is all relevant and generally up-to-date. This article could benefit with more information on formation process, types of minerals, mining, case studies, and future prospects.

Tone and Balance

The article keeps a neutral tone. It appears to be informative and descriptive. I do think the article is missing some information and could benefit from the addition of sections listed in the content section.

Sources and References

While the content is backed up by some sources from the 2000's and 2010's, I do not think the references list has been exhausted. Some of the references also need their publishing dates confirmed, this happened with some of my own references for my article too. I think a few more peer reviewed sources could be found. I found some helpful peer reviewed sources as well:

Allibone, A., Jones, P., Moore, J., Craw, D., MacKenzie, D., & Blakemore, H. (2017). Kilometre-scale structural setting of ore shoots in the Frasers gold deposit, Macraes mine, New Zealand. Ore Geology Reviews, 89, 1107-1121.

Paez, G. N., Ruiz, R., Guido, D. M., Ríos, F. J., Subias, I., Recio, C., & Schalamuk, I. B. (2016). High-grade ore shoots at the Martha epithermal vein system, Deseado Massif, Argentina: the interplay of tectonic, hydrothermal and supergene processes in ore genesis. Ore Geology Reviews, 72, 546-561.

Organization

There are some minor spelling and grammatical errors, I find this happens with fast typing. I like to run my work through word programs for clarity. I would suggest updating the lead section, and then having sections like: Formation, Characteristics, Types of Minerals, Exploration and Mining, Case Studies, Prospects, and Environmental Impacts of Mining (all in reference to ore shoots).

Images and Media

I think the image added to the article will fit the article better once the Gold Vein section is complete. The caption is concise, but a more descriptive explanation in the article would help.

Overall Impression

I think this article is a good start, but it is missing important sections. It will benefit from the author's completed additions.