User:RosyCrespin/Forced prostitution/KayeAKelley Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

RosyCrespin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RosyCrespin/Forced_prostitution?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Forced prostitution

Evaluate the drafted changes
I slightly edited wording of the first and last sentence in your contribution and fixed a few spelling/grammatical errors. This sentence may be redundant: "Forced prostitution" refers to conditions of control over a person who is coerced by another to engage in sexual activity."