User:Rotaik/sandbox

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Request review at WP:AFC
Your article has been initially reviewed: it was moved from your Sandbox and is now here. You can continue to edit it there.

I have blanked (not deleted!) the contents of this page to encourage you to do further editing on the Articles for Creation (AfC) page, because that is where the editors and reviewers will also see it.

When you are ready (which should be soon), you can submit it again from there. I have added some headings to try to make things clearer. PLEASE FEEL FREE TO CHANGE ANYTHING I DID!

The article needs two things: 1) Better sourcing and referencing. There is no question the artist is notable, but Wikipedia has to show why it thinks so, and the list of exhibitions is impressive and, I am sure, quite accurate - but where did you get that list from (what was your source?) You must put a reference in, at least at the end of the list. Books need ISBN numbers. Given these things, your article can be accepted. 2) Some tidying up is needed in English grammar, phrasing and formatting. As the author, it is your right to do this to your satisfaction before the article is published.

As soon as you have attended to these two issues, submit your article again. It will probably be accepted. If not, leave a message for me on my talk page and I will have a look again. Good work so far!  David_FLXD  (Talk) 05:20, 4 July 2012 (UTC)