User:Routarchita/Nzila Nzilambi/Sankara-ture-lumumba Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (Routarchita)
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Routarchita/Nzila Nzilambi

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * The completed section includes a lead sentence that forecasts the remaining entry which is currently in progress.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * The content included is very helpful, particularly because unfamiliar readers might assume varied spellings refer to different people. I would only suggest that the author include a hyperlink to Project SIDA because one of our peers is developing an article on the topic. Also, if there is any biographical data about Dr. Nzilambi's country of birth, it might be helpful to include here since Project SIDA involved researchers from around the world.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * The lead sentence is an objective reporting of factual information and the cite sources are relevant and the links are operable.

Organization

 * It might be helpful to consider at least drafting section headings to guide how you might include ongoing research.

Images and Media
N/A

For New Articles Only

 * The notability standard is difficult to prove, especially because many of our research subjects are not widely cited or recognized for their work. I am a little unclear about why Dr. Nzilambi was significant to research on HIV/AIDS in Africa. How does identifying Tuberculous as an opportunistic infection of HIV/AIDS help scientists improve their understanding of the disease? How was Dr. Nzilambi involved with Project SIDA? What did she do after the Project ended? Maybe these questions might be useful to consider.

Overall evaluation

 * The author has a great start! This biographical information will be very helpful for their Wikipedia entry. Meeting the notability standard is perhaps more challenging.