User:Routineless/Michelle Rau/Soullierek Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

@routineless


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Routineless/Michelle_Rau?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I've read through your sources and I think you have a really great collection of sources on zines and publications that Michelle Rau has engaged in discussing her own production of zines -- a good combination of primary and secondary sources that situate Rau in the comics/zine scenes.

Your article so far has a neutral tone and I think your sources will be very helpful at marking/tracking her career and engagement with queer comics. My only suggestion would be to make sure to bring in some more biographical information to contextualize her life as an artist and her life outside of her career. Overall, good job so far!