User:Rrami052/Homo erectus/Lrodr053 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Rrami052)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rrami052/Homo erectus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Homo erectus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Homo erectus
 * Homo erectus

Evaluate the drafted changes
The sandbox draft was well articulated and informative.

My critique:

1, Possibly add an image or 2 a lot of the citations have images on their page that are very useful and related.

2. In the intro you mention the skeleton of homo erectus as having plascity, but how would we know that ? I would possibly add an ancestral species that is used for comparison (you can put a graph comparing skull sizes for a quick summarization)

3. possibly discuss the different or changing environments that causes Homo E to evolve

4. Along with the current article I think ur addition is good and would fit