User:Rsharyliz/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Loop Trolley

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I think it relates to some of the more indirect and less apparent effects of technology intertwining with equity in real life. My first impression of the article was that it was okay. I definitely noticed some inconsistencies, grammar mistakes, and unideal phrasing, however it was mostly informative and linked well.

Lead Section
The lead section's introductory sentence was clear and concise, properly addressing what the article is about. However, the rest of the lead section is far too detailed and contains information that is not found in other sections of the article.

Content
The content of the article is relevant to the topic and is up-to-date. Historically, the Loop Trolley's funding and location could be related to marginalized groups and equity (the success of the Delmar Loop and nearby low-income communities), However that is not directly relevant to the topic.

Tone and Balance
The article maintains a neutral and fact-based tone and balance.

Sources and References
The article contains an appropriate amount of sources and references. There is a diverse array of types of sources ranging from articles, new reports, and exclusive radio interviews from reliable sources such as those who provided funding for the Trolley as well as public officials involved in decision making for the Trolley's operation clearance.

Organization and Writing Quality
The article can use better organization and quality of writing. Some of the heading titles can be better phrased as well as some paragraphs/sentences.

Images and Media
The article has a variety of images and media that add to its content. It may be useful to add the Loop Trolley's route/map as well as visual displays of funding and revenue over time. The current images can be better incorporated into the reading and flow of the article.

Talk-Page Discussion
There aren't really any conversations being had on the talk page, however it is a part of some important other WikiProjects such as St. Louis.