User:Rsinthespace/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Hula (Hula)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
When I first read the article, I found it is well-written when it comes to the basic knowledge about hula, the type of music that was locally produced in Hawaii. It talks a lot about the history of hula music and it also introduces some more specific kinds of hula form, or hula chant, developed under the cultural collision with Western music world. I have read some research that Amy Skillman has done about Hawaiian music, and it turned out that there still can be some space for the indigenous hula music being added in the wiki article. I would love to explore more on the different types of oli and how performer traditionally use them in various situations.

Evaluate the article

 * This is an article assessed at the level of C Class
 * The article's content is relevant and provides detailed introductory knowledge about the dance form from Hawaii. It also includes history through which two different types of Hula form were developed.
 * It is written neutrally by summarising resources related to the topic.
 * The article can still be more improved because it may not be organised well in a certain degree. I found something missing when it talks about oli, I might be able to find some more insights related to that by doing research.
 * The pictures are used properly and it helps to gain general pictures in audiences' mind.
 * It includes proper citation where necessary sometimes, but it still needs to be further in-text cited, and I think I would love to try contributing to that.