User:Rsinthespace/Hula/Peteryebuzhidaogaiqushenmemingzi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rss


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rsinthespace/Hula?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hula

Evaluate the drafted changes
In this sandbox draft I saw a huge number of editing. for the first thing Rss did add a lot about the forms of Hula. Then he compare the two different class of Hula dance, then He also give the resources for this part. After that at the Chant(Oli) part Rss also added a lot of informations with some resources. Since I don't really know about the Hula dance, I wouldn't give many humble opinions about this, but he did mentioned about the five subcategorized forms for Oli, But I didn't saw any precisely information about it. But I guess it would not be easy. for the part Rss added in there are basiclly the information about Hula so It is very neutral. and He mainly added three parts with different resources so I believe it is a great editing.