User:Rslashkayla/Rachael House/Lou-Andrea Callewaert Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Rslashkayla)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rslashkayla/Rachael House


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is a bevy of information. The only things I can think of that would drastically improve the article is organization and the addition of a bibliography. The article doesn't have any heading as of now so it reads like a paper. Additionally none of the information is currently cited so adding a clear references section and making sure each bit of information is linked back to a source will improve the article greatly.