User:Rslashkayla/Rachael House/Seracallahan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rslashkayla


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Rslashkayla/Rachael_House&oldid=1118884931
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rachael House

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your writing is neutral and there are quite a few links to other Wikipedia articles, which is good. This makes the article more significant and a good place for readers to go for base information on House. The thing that stood out to me the most is that there are not really and headings or titles. I feel like if you added some of these it would make the article a lot more readable and it would be easier to find information, making for a better user experience overall. Also, at the bottom you can delete the template of "Article Draft," "Lead," and "Article Body" if you are not going to use it. But, you can look to that for how to add titles and headings!