User:Rslindse/Attitude (psychology)/GJaet Peer Review

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Rslindse


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 * Attitude (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the rephrasing you added, however I would be hesitant to say “an overwhelming amount of researchers” when only one citation is being used. That citation does not looks like a meta analysis (which would be more approximate to use when saying an “overwhelming amount”) and is more of a history of attitude. A very brief analysis of the citations show that they are a little old, but most of them are from the past 10 years. Maybe finding more recent papers could be beneficial to this article. I like the path you are choosing with rephrasing sentences and I would keep along that track.