User:Rslindse/Attitude (psychology)/Kekecole Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rslindse


 * Link to draft you're reviewing?
 * Rslindse's Draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Current Version Link

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article does not yet have a leading section which is a part that I think should be done first as a way to set up the things that you will further talk about in the article. I think that developing more for the factors section of the article is a good step. They provided a broader understanding of what can go into understanding attitudes. I think that including the definition for attitude can be left out. I think in my own article I want to go back and review the sections like Rslindse did and add into those sections as well. There are many references that flow into her article well.