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Article Chosen: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peafowl

3 Suggestions to article: 1. There should be a section focusing on the breeding of peafowl and how they are domesticated in regions now in which some are even selectively bred.

2. This article does not specify the general length of peafowls. It ranges for each breed, as do their wingspans.

3. There is also no specification as to how much peafowls weigh generally in this article. It seems as if this would be important on a page focusing on the animal.

4. The history of the distribution of peafowls to parts of Syria, Egypt and the meditteranean is not discussed. The history of how this bird was introduced to other parts of the world could be significant to note in this article.

1 Sentence + Citation:

"The train of the Indian peacock ranges from 1.4-1.6 meters in length and accounts for more than 60% of the bird's entire length (2.3 meters)."

Citation: "Indian Peafowl." Fact Sheet. N.p., n.d. Web. 01 Oct. 2014. 