User:RthB4/Social Welfare Programs in South Africa/Ellanapack Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

RthB4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:RthB4/Social Welfare Programs in South Africa


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social welfare programs in South Africa

Evaluate the drafted changes.
How has the CSG expanded/evolved over the past decades? This sentence is confusing to me: “The government did not add any conditions upon the reception of CSG initially.” What was the reception of the CSG? What were the conditions desired?

Are there sources that back up this claim? “Studies have revealed that the recipients of CSG showed better nutrition status and better school enrollment rates compared to children who are equally poor.”

The Foster Child grant is very informative, concise and clear.

When was the Disability grant initiated? How is it dispersed? More details in this section could be very helpful.

When was the Care Dependency Grant initiated and by who?

Same questions for the War Veterans grant. “Veterans who fought in the Second World War (1939–1945) or the Korean War (1950–1953) and who are above the age of 60 or disabled are eligible to the war veteran grant”. Eligible to or eligible for? Also, maybe explain what means tested means.

What sources are used in the Old-age pension section? “From 1989 to 1993, the government took efforts to reform the old-age pension to expand it to the entire population and eliminate racial inequality in the pension program.” What were these efforts? Should you capitalize Black and Blacks?

Are there more updated housing welfare programs since this RDP in 1994?

Your descriptions are super informative, unbiased and detailed! This was very interesting to read!