User:Rts7473/sandbox

Link to sandbox where I'm editing: User:Rts7473/Wildlife Conservation Edit Sandbox
This section contains notes for the improving the above Wikipedia page. Items will be deleted as the page is edited over the duration of April-June 2019.

Structure and Subheadings
Header



"History"


 * Is missing.

"Major dangers to wildlife"


 * Starting paragraph focuses on habitat degradation and destruction, which can be its own bullet.
 * Change "Deforestation" bullet to "habitat fragmentation and destruction".
 * Remove "Population" bullet. It's irrelevant and poorly worded.
 * Finding better source for "Culling" bullet.
 * Bullets can likely be separated into subheadings.

"Wildlife conservation as a government involvement"


 * Change subheading to "government involvement"
 * Add subheadings for US conservation and international conservation.
 * Focuses too much on "The World Conservation Strategy" publication from the IUCN. There should be no need to.
 * TBC

"Non-government involvement"


 * Add the next subheading, "Active non-government organizations", to this section.
 * TBC

New subheading: Species under Conservation


 * Find some examples of species under conservation.