User:Rubymelman/Deafness in Thailand/Joanet23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rubymelman


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Deafness in Thailand
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Content
-First paragraph and last paragraphs in the language emergence section are missing citations.

- For significant organizations, the citation is attached after the name of the organization and not after information about the organizations so not very clear if information was retrieved from the organization's website or elsewhere.

- For Civil and Human Rights section a citation is missing for the first paragraph.

- Content is very relevant and thorough, sources are recent and up-to-date.

Tone and Balance
- Neutral tone that represents all information in a very factual manner.

Organization
-Very good organizations, everything is clear and easy to find. Sections are divided accordingly and different points are differentiated.

Overall
Very solid article that does a great job touching on each different topic in relation to deaf people in Thailand.