User:Rubyrae123/Yvonne Clark/Callierichard27 Peer Review

General info
Rubyrae123
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pkayku/Carolyn_Parker?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Yvonne Clark
 * Yvonne Clark

Evaluate the drafted changes
Notes:

- Great addition adding that she was the first female engineering at Vanderbilt!

- I really like that there is a separate research section, good organization

- Add more to her personal life section

- Great start!