User:Rubyrae123/Yvonne Clark/Ethorsen Peer Review

General info
Rubyrae123
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Yvonne Clark - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Yvonne Clark - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like how you added details about what she did in each of the places she researched. I think that was very needed. I think you could add a little more about her personal life, and potentially more information on her awards. Most of them are listed but not talked about, and I think knowing the importance of those could be really helpful. Even if you don't want to put info on them all, just linking some of them might be good. Overall, I really like your changes so far.