User:Rubytuesday2023/Nancy Meckler/NeonAfterlife Peer Review

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(Rubytuesday2023)
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Rubytuesday2023/Nancy Meckler
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Nancy Meckler

Evaluate the drafted changes
General Notes - I really enjoyed learning about Nancy Meckler! You have added a lot of relevant information and its clear you spent an appropriate amount of time on each section. I think how you went into detail about Nancy Meckler's influences in the Career section was very informative, and it adds context to what Nancy Meckler was trying to achieve with her career.

Lead - Your lead is great! It's concise and informative, it gets across who Nancy Meckler is and what some of her accomplishments are within her field.

Content - The Career section is formatted well, with all the relevant information. Nancy Meckler's career was more comprised of Theatre work than film work, so it makes sense that the majority of her career section is dedicated to theatre. The Filmography section is great, you list all Nancy Meckler's films, and go into a bit of detail about the critic's responses.

Tone - The tone is neutral throughout, and there is no obvious bias that I could see.

Sources - Your sources are reliable, up to date, and used well.

I'm looking forward to reading the completed article!