User:Runhan Hou/Shenyang Conservatory of Music/Sherrysyc Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Runhan Hou


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Runhan%20Hou/Shenyang_Conservatory_of_Music?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Shenyang Conservatory of Music

Evaluate the drafted changes
The overall article looks great. Information from the official websites are accurate and written in a neutral tone. I like that you combined research center and department together under academic. Here I listed a few minor suggestions for you:


 * Leading
 * I would suggest updating the Lead section since you added department section.
 * Content
 * If you consider further expanding your article, I would suggest introducing some famous professors in various departments.
 * Also in the original article page, the student number says 8000, but it did not say which year. So maybe consider update that else well.
 * Sources and References
 * I assume the two new references are usable if you cannot find any journal or peer-reviewed article about the institution.