User:Runhan Hou/Shenyang Conservatory of Music/Zzzzzjessica Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Runhan Hou


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Runhan Hou/Shenyang Conservatory of Music


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Shenyang Conservatory of Music

Lead
My peer has been updated the Lead to reflect the content, and it includes an introductory sentence that clearly describes the article's topic, and also includes a brief description of the article's major sections. The Lead does not include information that is not present in the article. The Lead is concise.

Content
The content added is relevant to the topic and is also up-to-date. The content does not miss any content. The article does not deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps. It does not address topics related to historically underreoresented populations or topics.

Tone and Balance
The content added by my peer is not so neutral, she may need to work on this more. There are no claims that appear too heavily biased toward a particular position. There are no viewpoints that are overrepresented or underrepresented. The content added does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another.

Sources and References
The new content is backed up by a reliable secondary source of information. The content accurately reflect what the cited sources say. The sources are thorough. The sources are current. The sources are written by a diverse spectrum of authors. The link works. But my peer gathers too much information form one source which also makes her article not so neutral. The link works. My peer still need to work on making citations of the article, some of the content still need to be cited, for example, in the History part, the first sentence which says the the school was found by those leaders.

Organization
The content added is concise and clear. The content added by my peer does not have any grammatical or spelling errors, and the content is well-organized.

Images and Media
My peer does not add any new image or media.

Overall Impression
The content added by my peer has improved the overall quality of the article, it becomes more completed. My peer can pay attention to the tone, find more sources and, make more citations.