User:Runnergirl11/Long-distance running/Pharmacy03 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Runnergirl11


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Runnergirl11/Long-distance_running?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Long-distance running

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead of this article definently covers all the topics presented later, and has a concise first sentence. However it does feel too long, and could benefit from being shortened if possible.

Content: The content of the article is all relevant to the overall topic of long-distance running. Some topics that could be added to the article are: national/ international running competitions, running in the Olympics, or awards/ world-records.

Tone and Balance: The article has an overall neutral tone, and does not appear to be attempting to persuade. It states all facts objectively.

Sources: The article is thoroughly sourced, and all sources appear to be reliable.

Organization: The article is relatively concise, with larger sections being broken down into smaller ones (with accurate subtitles). There are no spelling/ grammatical errors that I can find.

Images: The article makes use of well placed and relevant pictures throughout. One area that could benefit from images being added would be the "physiology" section, as the biological processes would be easier to understand with visual aids.