User:Runnergirl11/Long-distance running/WikiCar03 Peer Review

Peer Review: I will bold words that I have added in the case of grammatical issues.

Lead: "The endurance running hypothesis suggests that running endurance in the genus Homo arose because travelling over large areas improved scavenging opportunities and allowed for persistence hunting."

Overall I think the lead is good, though you should remove the link from "Professional running" because that page does not exist.

Content: the content in the history section seems good and has decent sources to back up the claims being made.

Maybe you could add a section in the physiology of running section on the biomechanics of top marathon runners, certain people that can achieve speeds and distances that others cannot such as Dean Karnazes, as well as taller individuals with certain body types made for long distance running.

The content has a good neutral tone

I do not see any content that you have added however so I cannot comment on that.

The images all seem relevant and well selected

maybe add a section on what type of training is required to run long distance events and possibly common injury's that occur.

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