User:RunzeY/Zhang Zhidong/Hedwig Li Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? RunzeY
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:RunzeY/Zhang Zhidong

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Lead evaluation
Well... it seems like this person didn't provide a Lead in this draft. I suggest to work on it in the future. Before the content sections, give a brief introduction.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Not mentioned.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? No.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? No. Not related.

Content evaluation
This person provide a specific description of how did Zhang Zhidong establish a modern military in Qing, which is a supplement to the early life of Zhang's original texts. But I'm not sure if this content added is up-to-date, there is no reference.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No.

Tone and balance evaluation
From the draft that I read so far, the content added is neutral. This person provides viewpoint with a good balance.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Are the sources current?
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
 * Check a few links. Do they work?

Sources and references evaluation
This person didn't show any reference for his source, so I can't tell if the source is academical or not. I suggest that to complete this section as soon as possible.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? No. There is no errors.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes.

Organization evaluation
This draft provides very little detail and it's short, but for the part that this person added, the new content is clear and easy to read. However, the sub-heading shows well-organized of this content, and no grammatical or spelling errors. I would suggest to provide more details in future.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

Images and media evaluation
There is no image ore media in the draft. Maybe you could add some image in your draft.

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Yes.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? It helps to improve the overall quality of the article.
 * How can the content added be improved? Provide more details in different area of Zhang, and remember to add reference.

Overall evaluation
Overall this person create a well-organized of the added content, which gives a supplement to the article. But other parts seem not finished yet. I suggest to write a Leap for the draft first, and don't forget to add citation/reference while adding new contents.