User:Rush1970/Heat shield/BrianaPhil Peer Review

General info
Rush1970
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Rush1970/Heat shield
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Heat shield

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like what you added about the history of heat shields. It helped give a better understanding about what types of shields were used when. I think, like you mentioned, adding what new technologies are being developed now and what could be done with them in the future would be a good addition to this section. I also like the ideas of talking about what kind of heat shields are being used on specific projects. For me, it's easier to read than the in-depth descriptions of the technologies.

Descriptions of the design process could also be interesting if they were added to the right place. I think getting some more sources would help you make additions. Lastly, looking at the Wikipedia page for the article I see some stuff that doesn't have a citation. It might be worth looking into it to see what the sources are for those things and citing them, or changing some information.