User:Rush1970/Heat shield/Ergyyq Peer Review

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Rush1970
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The layout of the paragraph you added at the bottom is structured very well and the information is presented concisely. It does a good job at providing useful information about not only the make of specific shields but also some historical context about the types of shields used at different points in time. Based off of the notes that you have written for your further additions, I think the paragraph I mentioned could be moved up to the ablative heat shield section since each of the mentioned spacecrafts in your paragraph utilized that style of heat shield. However, if you plan to add examples of the thermal soak heat shield to that paragraph later on I think it's fine where it is. Also in that paragraph, the Mercury, Gemini, and Apollo spacecrafts are mentioned but they were also mentioned as using ablative heat shields in a previous paragraph. I don't think that they need to be mentioned twice except for the Apollo spacecraft since good detail was provided about the make of the shield that wasn't provided earlier in the article. If you're able to find information about the make of the shields in the Mercury and Gemini spacecrafts, that could be a good addition as well. The ideas you have listed for possible additions to the article would definitely be interesting to read about and would provide really valuable information to the article. Our articles have very different subject matter but the way that you grouped your ideas together gives me some ideas about how I can organize the structure of my own article!