User:Rwaddell22/Black Power Revolution/NigelForest Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rwaddell22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rwaddell22/Black Power Revolution
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Black Power Revolution

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article draft has a nice neutral tone, there is no bias in the writing and is clearly stated what is being talked about by the indication of the sub headings. Great use of resources, they seem to support your article draft pieces and help the article development. You did however use the same resource twice. The references are also very long and hard to look for the information in the resources but they are well written and look reliable. I love how you added to the lead as well as adding to the history of Black Power Revolution. The information is both are very informative and tell the reader what this article is about which is good. You kept the information to the point and wrote what needed to be added which I liked, great job. Maybe adding some extra information on the status of the effect of the revolution today if you can find any material/references on the it and tell the reader how the revolution affected populations now. I really liked what you have added especially the lead, it's great additional information.