User:Rwaggoner8/Stream bed/AVavrinak Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rwaggoner8


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rwaggoner8/Stream bed


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * nope

Evaluate the drafted changes
Honestly a HUGE trove of information and data. not only would this be a worthwhile addition to the article in earnest, but also gave me plenty ideas on how to structure and change the draft I am making. The tone was very formal and well written the lead was strong and thoughtful. overall very pleased