User:Rwoo1/Black Twitter/Rhizzus Peer Review

General info
I am reviewing Rwoo1's work on the Black Twitter wiki page.
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rwoo1/Black Twitter
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Black Twitter
 * Black Twitter

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the Black Twitter wikipedia article contains a wealth of information and covers a broad range of the topic. The article discusses trends on Black Twitter, demographics, controversies, and the need for the counterpublic. The currently suggested improvements to the article do provide additional context and the addition of an image is useful.

There are a few other changes that can be added to further improve this article. In general, I did notice the multitude of direct quotations throughout various sections of the article. For instance, about half of the content in the "Reciprocity and community sub-section" is direct quotes, which lends to this section reading more as an essay than the encylclopedic tone that Wikipedia is known for. Some of these quotes can definitely be removed, and it would take nothing away from the understanding of the information.

Even further on that point the "Black women's experience on Black Twitter" has been flagged due to its tone and style also not reflecting Wikipedia's style. This is an important aspect of the article, as mentioned throughout Black women have a notable contribution to Black Twitter and its virality. I think this sub-section is a definite area of improvement, which can be tied into other sections. Instead of including it under the "User Base" heading, it can be moved down to the "Criticisms." Currently, the "Intersectionality" sub-section is confusing and most of the sources require verification or further clarification. By adding the exclusion of Black women, and more information about some of the hashtags they've (Black women) have started to this section, it can be more fully fleshed out. An easy example would be to include more information about hashtags like #YouOkSis and #FastTailedGirls which were designed to bring attention to Black women's experiences with street harassment and the adultification of Black girls respectively.