User:RyGuyVerve/Plum Village Monastery/Beabeets Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:RyGuyVerve


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:RyGuyVerve/Plum Village Monastery
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Plum Village Monastery

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you have created a good variety of additions to your article! You seem to have picked up well on the smaller but still important details that are missing throughout the original article. One thing that would help improve your change to the original article would be to add citations and make sure they're from reputable sources. I also think that expanding on some of the terms you have included in your additions would make your contribution more accessible and well-rounded. For example, it would be helpful to rephrase or add some more context to terms you use like "Singapore boat people". Great work!