User:Ryan9butler/Eddie Glaude/Hgarth Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ryan9butler


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Ryan9butler/Eddie Glaude


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Eddie Glaude

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi all,

As I posted on Adithiya's page--your sandbox is not set up correctly, your page is linked to Ryan's sandbox but there is nothing there, so folks are probably lost when they are doing their peer reviews, please move your content to Ryan's sandbox or change who is hosting the sandbox for your page.

In addition to the three book summaries you have there you need to add more --ie for all of these works listed: under Works.

You should also be crafting a narrative overview of his work and its contributions. You also need to add a section and big expansion of his media career, and its contributions. Add information about his chair ship of African American stdies here. We should be able to read that page and get an overall impression of who he is as a scholar, media pundit, person, etc.

Use these pages as examples of what you should be aiming for:

Angela Davis, Michelle Alexander, Keeanga-Yamahtta Taylor



There is a great deal more that can be added in terms of content and citations.