User:Ryan9butler/Eddie Glaude/Tahjowens Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pap19, Hilciaa, Adisriram123, Nc2428, Ryan9butler


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Eddie Glaude


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
My main piece of advice that I would say is to add more information to the page. Specifically more about Eddie Glaude's upbringing and what he did to attain his role and status.