User:RyanMontero/Kyphosus cinerascens

Comments by A Faucci (Apr 13):


 * Great work overall!
 * See my suggestions for deletions ( strikethrough ) or additions (underlined)
 * Make sure you integrate the text that is already on Wikipedia with your additional information so that it makes sense and there is not too much overlap. (Link to original article) For example the specifics on Morphology or Description from the lead in the original article could be added to your section on that (currently labeled as "Characteristics").
 * Nice work in citing your references. Maybe you can fix the messy part in the original article? Also, make sure the reference list is cleaned up in the final article on the main space.
 * You might want to add in the lead that they are also called nenue in Hawaiian.
 * You donʻt need the classification details as there is the taxabox for that.
 * Instead of habitat/ Common Area, call that section "Distribution and Habitat"
 * Make sure to read your text out loud one more time to catch any English or flow issues

Kyphosus Cinerascens
Scientific Name: Kyphosus Cinerascens

Common Name: High fin Chub

Hawaiian Name: Nenue

Kingdom: Animalia

Taxonomic Rank: Species

Characteristics
Based on the pictures, nenue are various colors such as a light silver, black, and on a rare occasion yellow signifying as the queen. The chub has an oval chunky profile with a short beak, relatively small scales covering majority of the body, the characteristics of the chub vary between spawns some with spots reflective from the sun.

Habitat / Common Area
Kyphosus Cinerascens , commonly known as High fin Chub or in Hawai'i a nenue is commonly found around pacific waters ranging from 1 feet to 40 feet. Commonly found in the rushing tides as well as large to small groups. The chub is more commonly to be found in waters ranging from 3 feet to 40 feet.