User:Ryan pelo/Tritium radioluminescence/ChaquellaM Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

<User:Ryan pelo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ryan%20pelo/Tritium_radioluminescence?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I would like to start off with how much I find the topic that you have chosen to be extremely interesting! I am so intrigued to find out what else you are going to add into your article. Obviously there is still some work to be done, so, I am not going to state the obvious on what should be input into your article. I do like how you decided to pick a topic that is normally overlooked. For instance, with myself, I would not even think about picking a topic about the lighting in watches; it is so interesting.