User:Ryangallaher/AI takeover/Katie.wheeler10 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ryangallaher


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=AI_takeover&diff=prev&oldid=1050493993
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * AI takeover

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

So far really good! I think this article is really relevant, especially to this class. The lead hasn't been added to, but I don't really think it needs to be much with your additions. The content is relevant and up to date which is great and I think it does help expand the section you added to. The tone is fairly neutral. I would maybe avoid saying things like "this trend will only continue to gain popularity" because that is sort of opinion based. I do like the addition of the author's argument. It was easy to read and I did not find any errors. Overall really good addition! Sources are used and cited which is great and the information is beneficial to the article and easy to follow.