User:Ryankaty14/Social comparison theory/Brikail Peer Review

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Ryankaty14
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 * User:Ryankaty14/Social comparison theory
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 * Social comparison theory

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What has been done is very clear and looks great! I love how you used personal situations to be able to relate to this topic. A tip that I would give is to benefit your article would be to check for grammar mistakes. I saw a lot of letters not capitalized that should be. One other suggestion would be to use more facts, because a lot of what is written is opinions. Other than that, I think you are off to a great start!