User:Ryankaty14/Social comparison theory/Kjk114211 Peer Review

General info
Ryankaty14
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ryankaty14/Social comparison theory - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Social comparison theory - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Ryan, my apologies for the delayed peer review.

The first thing I want to emphasize about the work you have done in your sandbox is to make sure o cite your sources. If you do so before going in and making your final changes to the live article, it will be much easier. Additionally, if you do that, your work will flow much better.

Right now, it is hard to tell exactly what you have in mind for your final edits/additions. I think that if you felt that you needed more information going into more depth regarding social comparison and how platforms such as Instagram relate to one another. I think adding a section on that would really provide good information for the public to read.

Lastly, something I would like to note is that make sure what you're writing on is prompted by sources. I understand how it may be easier to explain it in your own words without citations, but you can still do so by using sources. Cheers.