User:Ryanscott06/Konda language (Dravidian)/Pufferfish12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ryanscott06


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ryanscott06/Konda_language_%28Dravidian%29?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Konda language (Dravidian)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Very nice additions to the article! You've added missing information that expanded on the existing information well. The addition of a grammar section is clearly still in progress, but so far done very well. I also really like the way you've organized the information.

Here are some things that I've noticed about your draft, feel free to disregard if you see fit:


 * The lead section includes a good summary of the language, but it does not mention the phonology or grammar of the language, both of which are topics that have their own sub-sections in the article. I think you could consider adding a short sentence to mention phonology or grammar in the lead section.
 * One of the references in the lead section (and I can see that it was there before you began editing) is from The Times of India, which is a newspaper. I'm not sure if it is an appropriate reference for a Wikipedia article.
 * In the Phonology section, you mention that Konda has slight differences compared to Telugu. It would help if you could add information on what the subtle differences are (or, if the information below the vowels chart highlights the differences, make it more apparent).
 * To match the format of the original article, I would suggest listing the details under the Consonants chart using bullet points.
 * I would also suggest listing out the different cases in your case sub-section instead of leaving an open-ended colon. ("These cases are: nominative, accusative-dative, instrumental-ablative, genitive, and locative".)
 * As you continue adding information and researching, if you find any examples of the grammar in the Konda language, definitely include them so it's easier to understand the information.

Overall, great work!