User:Ryanzhu21/Fanny Hesse/Abigailmarie99 Peer Review

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Ryanzhu21


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Evaluate the drafted changes
I thought the information you plan to add was good. There was no bias to it and gives readers a brief run down and history on who they were. I would maybe find a little more information but I thought your content was easy to understand, followed formatting guidelines, and was organized, and had easy to follow sections. I thought it covered everything well but could maybe use a summary section where it ties everything together. All in all, I thought it was good. The writing was very clear and concise and the links appeared to work. My overall impression about the article was good, it was very organized and clear to the point. It did not feel cluttered or hard to read and I think it is a great start.