User:Ryanzisk26/São Tomé ibis/Paigeberzinski Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ryanzisk26


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ryanzisk26/S%C3%A3o_Tom%C3%A9_ibis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * São Tomé ibis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead -

The original article's lead is descriptive yet concise, it is not in need of editing unless more important and lead-relevant information is added to the body of the article.

Content -

There is little content on the original article, and incredibly limited information about conservation. The information added to the sandbox is a great start within the conservation section.

Tone and Balance -

The original article seems to have a good tone and all of the included information is balanced in size and is relative to the importance of the information itself. The information added in the sandbox is also neutral and balanced.

Sources and References -

Good start with the sources, needs more eventually

Organization -

There is little organization because the sandbox is limited in information, however when more information is added it will become more organized and split into parts.